First of all, I thank you for your work and I hope you'll spend a good working on my project.
I must precise the working frame I expect:
I'm interested in your expertise only if you could provide me at the end separated groups (Drums - Fx - Bass - Synth - Guitar - Voices). The master mix is for the release and in order to play my music live I need mixed stems to modulate my track.
Now, about the track itself:
I'd like that my track sounds good on most support: headphones - laptop - stage systems.
In brief, I don't expect major modifications, just the right tweak at the right moment: In details and on the whole track.
This track is the last of the three song EP. The two others are also available on Moja Audio for mix contest.
Additional technical information
There is specificities here:
This song has already been mixed by a professional sound engineer. I wasn't convinced by the final result and I decided to rework the whole track adding voices presence and drums. So it remains some tracks already mixed and clearly identifiable in their title as "BUS". If you face issues with those tracks, I can provide the original ones anytime.
I did (on purpose) the minimum panning in order to let you the maximum possibilities without loosing dynamic.
I didn't do any sidechain also.
In fact, beside the production treatment I only use Eq and a 3D mix tool.
About the Bassline, in my opinion deserves more presence (not volume) in the mix.
Different synth pad maybe benefit from some detune.
The voices deserves some tweaks too.
And the kick and snare maybe need some Eq and/or some shaping
Anyway, I think my rough mix is already pretty clear to demonstrate the whole idea, the color and the emotion of the track.
So, following your expertise, do what you feel.